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Edited by Su Dashui
Seeing that 4 months have passed halfway, there is no puppet drama that can provoke the big beam this year.
The marketing of "Hard to Coax" is overwhelming, but the word-of-mouth is indescribable, and the Douban score is only 4.0, which is much lower than the sister article "Secretly Can't Hide".
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I thought that this "Eating, Running and Love" might be able to save this year's puppet drama, but the audience still thought too much, not only the popularity was low, but the reputation was also quite poor.
What did the audience do wrong to be hit by such a bad drama.
"Eating, Running and Love" tells the story of Gan Yang (played by Chen Feiyu), who has a wealthy family, and Ding Zhitong (played by Zhuang Dafei), who is bent on making money, when they fall in love with each other.
This drama, from the title to the plot, implements one theme: blandness and tastelessness.
The original novel is set in the financial industry, and the male and female protagonists met in the last Ivy League school, devoted themselves to Wall Street, and separated from the financial crisis environment due to family reasons.
But the plot in the play was changed to a college campus, which seemed to cater to the audience, but in fact disrupted the foundation of the relationship between the male and female protagonists.
should exist, sincere emotions, realistic helpless hedging, directly invisible in the play.
And the dramatic tension that the screenwriter understands is to constantly create coincidences.
First, the male and female protagonists missed it at the airport, and then the same company missed it, and then left on the front and back feet at the convenience store, and finally met by chance at the game.
There are so many coincidences that intensive phobia is about to be committed, contrived and exaggerated.
This is not the end, the moment Ding Zhitong saw the male protagonist, his heart rate soared directly to 190, in this case, it is still recommended to see a doctor, not to take off the equipment.
It's just a coincidence, after all, film and television dramas always have to create a connection between the male and female protagonists, but you can't treat the audience as a three-year-old child.
Ding Zhitong was in a hurry to ride by part-time, but when he rode next to Gan Yang, he suddenly stopped in a hurry, stopped looking at the road, and turned his head to stare at the male protagonist on the side.
And Gan Yang fell in love at first sight.
Let's not talk about whether Zhuang Duffy's appearance is worth falling in love at first sight, if there is a person on the road who smiles at you inexplicably in reality, won't you think this person is a little problematic?
The next part of the bridge is to rub the audience's brain on the ground.
A doctor preparing for the competition casually dropped a USB flash drive containing important information on the shelves of a convenience store.
Generally, the content to be played in the game will be debugged before the game to avoid problems.
And Gan Yang and his doctor's teammates were about to take the stage to preach before they remembered that their USB flash drive was gone.
這個比賽成果的專利能賣三十多萬，說忘就忘也是讓人無語。為了推劇情犧牲人物的智商，對博士是有什麼誤解。
Ding Zhitong, who happened to be working at this convenience store, promised to send a USB flash drive, and after writing down Gan Yang's number on paper, he put down the paper and turned around and left.
She has such a good memory, so why bother.
What's even more outrageous is that Ding Zhitong didn't leave after sending the USB flash drive, not only sat down to watch the game, but also went back to the dormitory directly when it was over, forgetting the colleague who "watched the store for a while" for her.
Colleague: I've been wronged.
In just this one episode, there are several logical inconsistencies, and the other plots are even more difficult to explain.
This drama opens with a reunion, which is high-profile, interspersed with the interactive comparison of the campus period, trying to create a sour and painful feeling of love and hate.
However, the flat and straightforward plot is like a running account, and there is no emotional tension that hangs the audience's appetite, especially the performances of the two actors, which can be called a disaster.
When I saw that the male and female protagonists were Chen Feiyu and Zhuang Dafei, I had a hunch that this drama could not have any acting content, but when the plot was completely uninteresting, the acting skills of the male and female protagonists were even more obvious.
The first is Chen Feiyu.
Gan Yang played by Chen Feiyu is a rich second generation with excellent grades, and his image and temperament are more consistent, but once he is asked to react, his original form will be revealed.
After many years, when he saw his longing ex again, his expression was like this:
Seeing that the heroine was going to marry someone else, in addition to his eyes being redder than the previous scene, he still had this expression:
If you don't combine the situation, you can't see what the emotions of the characters are, and this kind of play can't even be called "floating on the surface", you can only say that you have no feelings and skills.
Without the blessing of the characters in "Light Me, Warm You", Chen Feiyu's acting skills can't even reach the passing line, or go to make war movies, at least someone will give him some highlights.
This is followed by Zhuang Dafei.
Zhuang Dafei's resources have been very good since his debut, and he first partnered with Dapeng and Baike to star in "The Annual Meeting Can't Stop!" Later, he cooperated with Xiao Zhan and starred in the movie "The Legend of the Eagle Shooting Heroes: The Great Hero".
And her acting skills still haven't improved much.
In the new play, Zhuang Dafei plays Ding Zhitong, a girl who is diligent and hard working to be admitted to a prestigious school.
Asking Zhuang Dafei to play this ordinary, down-to-earth, and debt-ridden role is really not convincing at all.
Zhuang Dafei's appearance is more male, and the picture in the same frame with the male protagonist seems to be robbing people with the male protagonist.
The interpretation of Ding Zhitong when he was a student is at least age-appropriate, but the interpretation of Ding Zhitong, who has worked hard in the workplace for many years, is like a child stealing adult clothes.
He pursed his lips and nodded, shook his head, and looked at ease, but it only looked like he was pretending.
In addition, the interaction between the two protagonists in the play has no sense of CP, Gan Yang took a bite of ice cream to kiss the heroine, one seemed to be playing a shoddy prank, and the other seemed to be really disgusted.
It's so oily, I feel like my eyes are being bullied after reading it.
After watching this drama, it's hard not to feel that this is a resource café taking revenge on the audience.
The plot is boring, obviously reunited, and love at first sight are all episodes with enough dramatic tension, but whether it is filmed or acted, there are no waves.
The bugs in the plot are also dense, in order to promote the feelings of the male and female protagonists, they don't take other characters and behavioral motives seriously at all.
There are also two leading actors' acting skills, almost "looking in the mirror", one is more wooden than the other, and the appearance is not so high that the audience can ignore the acting skills and plot, it can only be said that the audience who has not seen it can be regarded as earned.
However, this drama is currently updated to the ninth episode, and if the follow-up plot can improve, there may be room to win back the audience.